Resume Personal Statements Examples

What is the best way to start a resume?

 

Think about this: 

 

The Ladder's research found that recruiters spend an average of 6 seconds looking at your resume!  Yeah, you read that right. 

 

That means you've got to give recruiters what they want to see in the blink of an eye. But how?

 

A little something called a resume summary. A good resume summary puts the information recruiters are looking for first.

 

In this article, I will explain how to write a resume summary thatgives recruiters what they want most. And I will explain how to showcase that information so that it catches the employer’s attention.

 

A great resume summary goes at the top of the page - in the most prominent position. Use it to attract recruiters' attention. Here is a template from our resume builder(create your resume).

 

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What Is a Resume Summary 

 

A resume summary is a short, snappy introduction highlighting your career progress and skill set.  

 

An example of a resume summary looks like this:

 

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Administrative Assistant with +3 years of experience in a sensitive corporate environment. Outgoing and detail-oriented, I am proficient at building and maintaining professional relationships. Have an Associate's Degree in Office Administration.

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Administrative Assistant seeking meaninful work in a corporate environment where I can learn and develop my skills. 

 

A resume summary is also known as: 

 

  • Qualifications Summary
  • Summary of Qualifications
  • Competencies
  • Resume Summary Statement

 

Think of it as an “elevator pitch” or “sales pitch” that you can use anytime someone says: 

 

“So. Tell me about yourself.” 

 

Want to make sure your resume summary will hook every recruiter and get you that interview?

 

Get our free ebook and see samples of job-winning resume summaries that match real job posts:  Resume Summary Examples for Every Profession.

 

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Resume Summary vs. Objective: What’s the Difference? 

 

The difference between a general resume summary and a resume objective looks like this: 

 

You are at a party. Let’s call you Robert.

 

Your wingman approaches the girl you like. 

 

Resume Objective Wingman says: 

 

Robert likes girls and wants to leverage his skills to marry one. 

 

Resume Summary Wingman says: 

 

Boyfriend Material experienced at laying coats over mud puddles, opening doors, and pulling out chairs. Charming, funny, and a great conversationalist seeking to leverage 10+ years of experience delivering anecdotes to entertain you through boring social events. Has an MA in hand holding and a license to cook romantic dinners.   

 

Which wingman is going to get Robert the girl?

 

Resume summary. 

 

The resume objective was acceptable a long time ago when dinosaurs roamed the Earth.

 

All you had to do at the beginning of a resume was write a one-liner that told the recruiter:

 

1. Who you are. 

2. That you want the job.

 

Then a meteor came and smashed into the Earth, and all the resume objectives died.

 

Not.  

  

Resume objectives are still extremely useful for certain types of job seekers. 

 

So, Who Should Use a Professional Resume Summary? 

 

Professionals.

 

Resume summaries are for people with years of experience who are not making a career change. 

 

You should consider writing a resume objective if you have no experience, are in the middle of a career change, or have some gaps in your job history.

 

If you think that a resume objective would be a better fit for you, read our full guide on how to write resume objectives: "+20 Resume Objective Examples - Use Them On Your Resume (Tips)"

  

And Where Does a Resume Summary Statement Go on a Resume? 

 

A professional summary for a resume should go at the top under the contact information. 

 

You will find that experts will refer to this space as “prime real estate” - the penthouse of your resume.

 

Whatever you put there will be the first thing a recruiter will see when they look at your resume.

 

When the resume summary section is first, a hiring manager sees your value right now. 

 

So, don't waste the space. 

 

How Long Should a Career Summary on a Resume Be? 

 

Depending on who you ask, you will be told that a good example of a resume summary is anywhere from three to six sentences. 

 

Think about this: 

 

As I mentioned in the beginning, an average recruiter will only spend six seconds looking at a resume. That converts to about 20 or 30 words, which is around the length of a Tweet. 

 

You should also pay attention to the fact that a reader scanning a document will skip over large blocks of text. 

 

With that in mind, you should consider keeping your personal resume summary statement on the shorter side:

 

Around 3 sentences or 50 words. 

 

Pro Tip: Resume summaries tend to be short. Take a look at a sample resume template from our resume builder. You can create a similar resume here.

 

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How to Write a Resume Summary in 7 Easy Steps 

 

1. How to Start a Summary With a Few of Your Best Accomplishments 

 

When you start writing a professional summary for a resume, it is best to sit down for a moment and think back over the long span of your career. 

 

Ask yourself: 

 

  • What are my brightest moments? 
  • What am I proud of achieving? 
  • What do I love most about what I do? 
  • What do I do best? 

 

Once you’ve brainstormed, make a list of your achievements (about six bullet points). This is your master list.

 

Here is what it would look like if you were, for example, Indiana Jones:

 

Indy’s Master List of Accomplishments and Top Skills

 

  • Found the Ark of the Covenant.
  • Found the Sankara Stones. 
  • Found the Holy Grail. 
  • Effectively able to dispatch Nazi bad guys. 
  • Proficient in the use of a bullwhip.
  • Able to fly planes, ride horses, and commandeer motorcycles.

 

Keep in mind that these are the brightest moments and can come from any point in your career. 

 

Now make a quick list of your top transferable skills. Transferable skills are skills that you can use in any job. For example, being able to write or being able to speak fluent Spanish. 

 

Indy’s Transferable Skills 

 

  • Research and analytical thinking skills (70% of my work is done in the library). 
  • Excellent cultural sensitivity.
  • Able to work in a high-stress, fast-paced environment.
  • Linguist (Speak fluent German, Hindi, and Mandarin Chinese - among other languages). 

 

Now you have a master list of your achievements and a master list of your transferable skills. Set these aside for a moment. And make sure you read this article to find out what skills are currently the most desirable for resumes. 

 

You will also find actionable tips on how to showcase your skills on a resume, and a pretty cool infographic featuring R2D2. What does R2D2 have to do with resume skills? Find out here.

  

2. Scan the Job Post - Find out What the Employer Needs 

 

Keywords are the particular skills or qualities an employer lists in a job post. Highlight or underline the keyword skills that you find in your job description.

 

Ask yourself:

 

  • Who are they looking for?
  • What value do they want an employee to provide?
  • What extra skills or qualities not listed would add unexpected value?

 

Indy’s Job Description - Cocktail Server

 

 

3. Research the Job - Find Out What is Valuable

 

Find a few similar job posts. Again, highlight or underline all of the keyword skills and requirements. Compare the new keywords to those in your job description. 

 

Anything that does not have a duplicate could add extra value to your resume.

 

Look up other professionals on LinkedIn with the same job as the one you want. Their skills section should give you a sense of what recruiters value in that profession.

 

4. Tailor Your List - Make Your Skills List a Recruiter’s Wish List

 

Ask yourself:

 

  • Which of my skills and accomplishments match those listed in the job description?
  • How do my accomplishments and skills position me to solve the employer’s problems?
  • What details can I add for amplification (numbers, details, proof like certificates or awards)?  

 

Skills Listed in Job DescriptionIndy's Skills and Accomplishments
Guest Services, Sales, and People SkillsExperience as a Zeppelin waiter and professor / extremely culturally sensitive.
Able to learn and master new information.Research and Analytical Thinking
Basic MathsPhD - Linguistics / Archeology / History
BilingualGerman, Hindi, Mandarin Chinese etc...
Extensive Physical ActivityAble to avoid booby traps, including giant rolling boulders, and survive strange accidents like plane crashes and collapsing bridges.
Exposure to ElementsSurvived exposure to the Ark of the Covenant, snake pits, being lowered into lava pits, etc...

 

5. Start With Your Title to Define Yourself Out of the Gate

 

Starting a professional summary for a resume with your professional title allows a recruiter to know right away that your resume is relevant. 

 

Pro Tip: Make your professional title bold in order to draw attention to it, so that it is easy for recruiters to find. You will also want to add the number of years you worked in that position.

 

For Example: 

 

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Marketing Manager

Sassy Marketing Manager with 5+ years of experience.

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Marketing Manager with 5+ years of experience.

 

6. Focus on Specific Results to Prove and Demonstrate Value

 

Now it’s time to go back to your master list.

 

Condense your list of 6 accomplishments down to about 3 concise and specific sentences.

 

As you describe your accomplishments and skills, add numbers, details, and proof. Focusing on quantifiable results in a career summary for a resume does a couple of things: 

 

  1. Draws the eye of the recruiter and gives them a tangible sense of what you’ve achieved.
  2. Provides proof that your claims are more than just hot air.
  3. Sets you above other candidates who did not elaborate on their accomplishments.
  4. Helps the recruiter imagine you achieving the same results for them.

 

Indy’s Professional Resume Summary Sample

 

Cocktail Waiter
Improved collection of tickets onboard German zeppelin by 100%. 
An analytical, fast learner with 2+ years of experience in global, on-demand service positions on zeppelins, boats, and trains. Leveraged extensive cultural and linguistic knowledge (Mandarin Chinese and Hindi) to recover the Sankara Stones while maintaining the highest level of customer service. Able to endure exposure to elements such as lava and snake pits, and able to physically outmaneuver such obstacles as giant boulders in boobytrapped tombs.

 

 

  1. Guest Services, Sales, and People Skills 
  2. Able to Learn and Master New Information
  3. Basic Math
  4. Bilingual 
  5. Extensive Physical Activity
  6. Exposure to Elements 

 

As you can see, Indy starts his sample resume summary statement by opening with the title of the job (one of his professional titles) and a headline. His headline is supported by details:

 

“Improved ticket collection by 100%.”

 

He then adds five of the six skills from the job description that match his skill set to his resume summary

 

He also adds details to amplify the information: 

 

“Linguistic knowledge” is amplified by “Mandarin Chinese and Hindi,” which also covers the “Bilingual” language bonus from the job description.

 

He avoids the first person, has added keywords like “exposure to elements,” and has added extra value by exhibiting experience in wait service on various modes of transportation that might be interesting to an employer seeking a waiter to serve drinks on a boat. 

 

Dr. Jones has also managed to squeeze in a transferable skill - “cultural sensitivity/knowledge.”

  

7. The Name Drop - A Tried and True Way to Generate Interest 

 

Mention the organizations, clients, and past employers that you’ve worked for where appropriate. 

 

Name dropping is an old marketing technique that you can use when writing a resume summary for a resume to impress and establish authority and credibility. 

 

One word of warning:

 

Employers could see name dropping as unprofessional snobbery. You need to make sure you don’t cross the line.

 

Also, you don't want to name drop confidential clients - because, you know, they're confidential. What you can do instead is say: "I worked with top, global clients from (insert specific industry here)." 

 

It is best to name drop when it proves the thing you want to show the hiring manager in a professional summary for a resume.

 

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Manage and maintain client relations with large, multi-national companies including Coca-Cola, Pfizer, and Johnson & Johnson.
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Brought in such confidential clients as Disney and Hilton Hotels.

  

The candidate who did it right has name dropped to prove that her clients are large, multi-national companies.

 

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The 7 Dos and Don’ts of Writing a Resume Summary 

 

1. Consider Adding a Headline for Extra Oomph

 

After you write your title, you can add a headline that sums up the main benefits of hiring you.

 

Indy’s Headline:

 

Improved collection of tickets onboard German zeppelin by 100%. 

 

2. Microsoft Word is Not an Accomplishment So Leave It Out

 

Leave your core competencies for the skills section of your resume. 

 

The resume summary section is for your best skills and keyword skills. Microsoft Office is boring and pedestrian. 

 

Your mom, your sister, and your dog can all use Word. 

 

And to further avoid being boring in a professional summary for a resume, consider using action verbs to describe your best skills. 

 

Avoid boring adjectives like “articulate” or “innovative.” Also, get rid of overused verbs like “managed” or “organized.” 

 

Action verbs are energetic and specific:

 

  • “managed” becomes “orchestrated” 
  • “communicated” becomes “persuaded” 
  • “innovated” becomes “overhauled” 

 

Don’t go overboard. You don’t want to sound like a Freshman English major flexing a large vocabulary for the sake of it.  

 

Remember that you should use keywords even if they are adjectives. 

 

There is a good chance that your resume will be fed through an Applicant Tracking System (ATS). The ATS will scan your resume for keywords from the job description. So you need to include them throughout your resume.

 

3. Ditch the First Person Pronouns to Focus on the Employer

 

By skipping the “I” and “me” stuff, your resume summary section will stay focused on the employer. 

 

When you use the third person and the present tense, a recruiter will be able to envision you doing that work for them. 

 

Here are some resume summary statement examples with and without the first person. If you think it's more appropriate to use the first person, you should. It's up to you to decide.

 

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Detail-oriented Graphic Designer with +2 years of experience in a fast-paced startup environment. Proficient with the Adobe Creative Suite and web design. Seeking to bring fast, intelligent solutions to the position of Graphic Designer at your company. Have a Bachelor's Degree in Graphic Design.
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I am a detail-oriented Graphic Designer with +2 years of experience in a startup environment. I am proficient with the Adobe Creative Suite and I want to bring intilligent solutions to the position of Graphic Designer at your company. I have a Bachelor's Degree in Graphic Design.

 

4. Ignore Tasks You Hate For Your Sake

 

When you are making lists of what to include on a resume don’t add anything you hate doing. 

 

Same goes for a summary in a resume.

 

If you hate doing something (even if you are really good at it), leave it. 

 

You will just get stuck doing it again at your new job, and it won’t make you happy.

 

5. Avoid Being Generic By Tailoring Each Resume Summary to the Job

 

Yes, that’s right. Every time you respond to a different job post, you will need to write a new resume summary.

 

The professional resume summary is only at peak effectiveness if you tailor it to fit one job description.

 

So, if you are applying for 100 jobs, you need 100 resume summaries. 

 

You don't have to rewrite the entire thing. You can simply retouch your best resume summary by changing keywords.

 

Just make sure that it is tailored to the job post.

 

6. How Long Should a Resume Be? 

 

How long should a resume be? In a word: short.

 

Some experts will tell you about the “one-page rule.” 

 

You should aim for one page, but resumes are not glass slippers. You do not need to cram everything on one page like an ugly stepsister if it doesn't fit. 

 

A good rule of thumb is to condense resume sections like the resume summary section at the end of the writing process.

 

Trim the fat and keep it lean. 

 

Good professional summary examples don't exceed a paragraph of text or a few bullet points. 

 

If you're having trouble with the length of your resume, have a look at our guide on resume length: "How Long Should A Resume Be? Everything You Need To Know"

  

7. Avoid the Cardinal Sin of Resume Writing...

 

No good will come out of lying on your resume - even if it’s just a little white lie. 

 

Maybe you aren’t as good at creating spreadsheets as you made it sound. Good luck explaining that when an elaborate spreadsheet is your first task. 

 

Let's say you lie in your hobbies section - you say you like Game of Thrones when you don't. Who cares? Maybe the rabid fan who is conducting your interview. Now you know nothing, Jon Snow. Uh oh.

  

 

The best resume summary grabs recruiters’ attention by shouting out:

 

“Hey, I’m who you are looking for!”

 

And this is useful when it falls into the hands of a bored and overworked recruiter. 

 

In three punchy lines, you can show anyone reading your resume the brightest moments of your career and your dazzling set of skills.

 

Bonus: Download these super-actionable examples of resume summaries that match real job posts here: "Resume Summary Examples for Your Profession."

 

Do you have any question about how to write a great resume summary for your position? Leave a comment. I'll be happy to answer.

by Michael Cheary

OK, so putting a personal statement together is never easy…

But even if you’ve written one before, how you write a personal statement will always depend on your current situation. In other words, what you write as a school leaver will look a lot different to someone who has many years of previous work experience.

To help you find the right one for you, here are some real personal statement examples – and how you can use them to make your CV stand out:

 

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University personal statement 

First things first: personal statements aren’t just for your CV.

They’re also a key part of the UCAS application process, and a way to sell yourself to prospective universities. However, they will be much more detailed – and longer – than the one you write for a job application.

We’ve covered everything you need to know about personal statements for university here.

 

School leaver personal statement example

All personal statements should be tailored to the role in question. No exceptions.

Start by answering the following three questions: Why do you want to work in this industry? What skills make you right for the role (hint: use the job description)? And where do you want to go in your career?

However, school leavers should always focus on the latter – and what you can bring to the business, as well as focusing on the knowledge and skills gained through education, rather than employment history. Soft skills are also a great place to start.

Example:

A highly motivated and hardworking individual, who has recently completed their A-Levels, achieving excellent grades in both Maths and Science. Seeking an apprenticeship in the engineering industry to build upon a keen scientific interest and start a career as a maintenance engineer. Eventual career goal is to become a fully-qualified and experienced maintenance or electrical engineer, with the longer-term aspiration of moving into project management.

School leaver CV template

 

Graduate personal statement example

Similar to a school leaver personal statement, but with extra attention paid to specific things you’ve studied during higher education.

Once again, try and explain why you’re applying and where you’d like to go in your career, as well as the specific skills or knowledge you can offer. But try and drop in a few more details on your degree (projected grades are fine), as well as particular modules that have inspired you to work in this profession – if possible.

And remember: a personal statement written for a CV differs greatly from one written for a university application. If you haven’t written one before, you should start by reading our tips on how to write a personal statement.

Example:

A recent business economics graduate with a 2:1 honours degree from the University of X, looking to secure a Graduate Commercial Analyst position to use and further develop my analytical skills and knowledge in a practical and fast-paced environment. My career goal is to assume a role which allows me to take responsibility for the analysis and interpretation of commercial data for a well-respected and market-leading leading company.

Graduate CV template

Unemployed/redundancy personal statement example

Dealing with redundancy is never easy. But when dealt with in the right way, it needn’t be a hindrance when making applications.

Put the main focus on your employment history, and provide further information for your break in your cover letter. You don’t even necessarily need to mention it again, if you’ve already explained it elsewhere.

Remember, your personal statement is intended to sell yourself. So emphasise your positives rather than apologising for a negative.

Example:

Driven Retail Manager with over ten years’ experience in the fashion industry. Proven track record of success, including managing the top performing store in the region, and having the lowest staff turnover rate of all UK outlets. Currently out of work due to company closure, looking for the right opportunity to bring my expertise to a well-established fashion brand in an upper management position.

How to: Deal with redundancy

Redundancy CV template

Career break personal statement example

There are many good reasons someone may need to take a career break.

Some possible examples could include parental leave, caring for a family member, plans to travel or long-term illness. However, whatever the reason for your own break, it’s never something you should feel the need to justify to a prospective employer.

In fact, knowing how to explain a gap in your CV is mostly about confidence. So leave any extra explanation for your cover letter and focus your personal statement on your career before the break – and any skills learned during your time off which may be applicable to the role.

Example:

A highly motivated and experienced PA, currently looking to resume my professional career after dedicating the last five years to raising a family. Excellent admin skills, thorough knowledge of all Microsoft Office programs, as well as proficiency in minute-taking and extensive experience liaising with clients. After volunteering for one day a week with a local charity to refresh my skills, now fully committed to continuing my career on a full-time basis.

Career break CV template

Career change personal statement example

If you’re changing industry completely, think about any transferable skills and applicable to the sector you’re moving into.

Any numbers you can give to demonstrate your success could be crucial – even if you’re moving into an area where your expertise may seem slightly different. So always aim to back up your claims with real examples.

Focus on one or two achievements, demonstrate the impact they had, and you’ll instantly start adding value to your application.

 

Example:

As an experienced sales manager, my tenacious and proactive approach resulted in numerous important contract wins. My excellent networking skills have provided my team with vital client leads, and my ability to develop client relationships has resulted in an 18% increase in business renewals for my current organisation. After eight years in sales, currently seeking a new challenge which will utilise my meticulous attention to detail, and friendly, professional manner.

Changing careers: What you need to know 

Career change CV template

Final thoughts

If you’re still not sure of what to write, don’t panic.

Crafting a winning personal statement will take time, especially if you haven’t written one before. Use these examples as a loose structure to follow, and you’ll be able to add to them as your experience grows.

And remember: you should always aim to edit your personal statement for each role you apply for. That way, you can ensure you’re really selling yourself to their role, rather than simply sending the same generic statement for each application.

It should only take a few more minutes to complete. But if it’s enough to attract an employers interest, it will be time well spent in the long run.

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